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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Ziyang,

nice abstract. I sign off with minor comments.

L16: datasets, which -> datasets. 

(this sentence is quite long)

L16-17: which are complementary to the previous dielectron results. -> These measurements are complementary to the previous dielectron results.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Feb 20, 2023 at 4:43 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Ziyang,

Thank you for pointing these slides. I missed these.
Looking forward to seeing you new updates.

I have no further comments, I sign off.

Regards
Nihar





On 2023-02-20 08:27, zli1 wrote:
> Hello Nihar,
>
> Thanks for your comments, I upload a new version and please find my
> recent presentations in below link:
>
> Collaboration meeting-September 2022 :
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/STARmeeting_20220912_lzy_v3_0.pdf
> preliminary request :
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/zli1/Run14-very-low-pT-Jpsi-preliminary-request
>
> This abstract also includes low mass dilepton pairs, which is the work
> from Jian Zhou, so the presentation will be similar to my talk in
> ICHEP2022 :
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICHEP-2022/Very-low-pT-di-muon-production-peripheral-AuAu-collisions%E2%80%A8-200-GeV-STAR
>
> Best,
> Ziyang
>
> On 2023-02-20 00:18, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> Hello Ziyang,
>>
>> Please find a few minor comments on your nice abstract.
>>
>> Not sure, if you have presented such measurement and discussed at
>> HP-pwg.
>> In case I missed it, can you please point to your precious
>> presentations?
>>
>> Title:
>> "Very low pT dimuon…" -> "Dimuon production at low transverse momentum
>> in peripheral Au+Au…"
>> Here no need to use "Very" and title needs rephrase as above.
>> L2: "…photons, leading …" -"photons leading
>>
>>
>> Thank you
>> Nihar
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On 2023-02-17 13:34, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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