STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Ziyang,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I don't have any comments on your v5 version.

Cheers,

Yi

On Thu, Feb 23, 2023 at 4:46 PM Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Thanks for the quick update.

It looks good to me and I sign off.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Thu, Feb 23, 2023 at 9:38 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Barbara,

Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version. The previous
version (v3) is also enclosed for your reference.

Best,
Ziyang
On 2023-02-23 16:22, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Ziyang,
>
> no problem.
> The new version looks good.
> But if I might suggest, I would shorten a bit the introduction part
> and instead add a sentence related to the model comparison, that I
> think you had before.
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Thu, Feb 23, 2023 at 9:19 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Dear Conveners,
>>
>> I just found the ATHIC abstract has a limit of 1000 chars, so I
>> edited
>> out some words and upload
>> a new version (v4), please have a look. I'm very sorry about that.
>>
>> The deadline for abstract submission is extended to March 10.
>>
>> Best,
>> Ziyang
>>
>> On 2023-02-20 23:34, zli1 via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>> Hi Barbara,
>>>
>>> Thanks for your comments, I upload a new version.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> Ziyang
>>> On 2023-02-20 23:09, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
>>>> Hi Ziyang,
>>>>
>>>> nice abstract. I sign off with minor comments.
>>>>
>>>> L16: datasets, which -> datasets.
>>>> (this sentence is quite long)
>>>> L16-17: which are complementary to the previous dielectron
>> results. ->
>>>> These measurements are complementary to the previous dielectron
>>>> results.
>>>>
>>>> Cheers,
>>>> Barbara
>>>>
>>>> On Mon, Feb 20, 2023 at 4:43 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hello Ziyang,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you for pointing these slides. I missed these.
>>>>> Looking forward to seeing you new updates.
>>>>>
>>>>> I have no further comments, I sign off.
>>>>>
>>>>> Regards
>>>>> Nihar
>>>>>
>>>>> On 2023-02-20 08:27, zli1 wrote:
>>>>>> Hello Nihar,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks for your comments, I upload a new version and please
>> find
>>>>> my
>>>>>> recent presentations in below link:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Collaboration meeting-September 2022 :
>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/STARmeeting_20220912_lzy_v3_0.pdf
>>>>>> preliminary request :
>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/zli1/Run14-very-low-pT-Jpsi-preliminary-request
>>>>>>
>>>>>> This abstract also includes low mass dilepton pairs, which is
>> the
>>>>> work
>>>>>> from Jian Zhou, so the presentation will be similar to my talk
>> in
>>>>>> ICHEP2022 :
>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICHEP-2022/Very-low-pT-di-muon-production-peripheral-AuAu-collisions%E2%80%A8-200-GeV-STAR
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>> Ziyang
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 2023-02-20 00:18, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>>> Hello Ziyang,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Please find a few minor comments on your nice abstract.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Not sure, if you have presented such measurement and discussed
>> at
>>>>>
>>>>>>> HP-pwg.
>>>>>>> In case I missed it, can you please point to your precious
>>>>>>> presentations?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Title:
>>>>>>> "Very low pT dimuon…" -> "Dimuon production at low
>> transverse
>>>>> momentum
>>>>>>> in peripheral Au+Au…"
>>>>>>> Here no need to use "Very" and title needs rephrase as above.
>>>>>>> L2: "…photons, leading …" -"photons leading
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thank you
>>>>>>> Nihar
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 2023-02-17 13:34, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material
>>>>> for a
>>>>>>>> review,
>>>>>>>> please have a look:
>>>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62633
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Deadline: 2023-02-28
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