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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Ziyang,

no problem.

The new version looks good.

But if I might suggest, I would shorten a bit the introduction part and instead add a sentence related to the model comparison, that I think you had before. 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Thu, Feb 23, 2023 at 9:19 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Conveners,

I just found the ATHIC abstract has a limit of 1000 chars, so I edited
out some words and upload
a new version (v4), please have a look. I'm very sorry about that.

The deadline for abstract submission is extended to March 10.

Best,
Ziyang

On 2023-02-20 23:34, zli1 via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Barbara,
>
> Thanks for your comments, I upload a new version.
>
> Best,
> Ziyang
> On 2023-02-20 23:09, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
>> Hi Ziyang,
>>
>> nice abstract. I sign off with minor comments.
>>
>> L16: datasets, which -> datasets.
>> (this sentence is quite long)
>> L16-17: which are complementary to the previous dielectron results. ->
>> These measurements are complementary to the previous dielectron
>> results.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Barbara
>>
>> On Mon, Feb 20, 2023 at 4:43 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>>> Hello Ziyang,
>>>
>>> Thank you for pointing these slides. I missed these.
>>> Looking forward to seeing you new updates.
>>>
>>> I have no further comments, I sign off.
>>>
>>> Regards
>>> Nihar
>>>
>>> On 2023-02-20 08:27, zli1 wrote:
>>>> Hello Nihar,
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for your comments, I upload a new version and please find
>>> my
>>>> recent presentations in below link:
>>>>
>>>> Collaboration meeting-September 2022 :
>>>>
>>>
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/STARmeeting_20220912_lzy_v3_0.pdf
>>>> preliminary request :
>>>>
>>>
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/zli1/Run14-very-low-pT-Jpsi-preliminary-request
>>>>
>>>> This abstract also includes low mass dilepton pairs, which is the
>>> work
>>>> from Jian Zhou, so the presentation will be similar to my talk in
>>>> ICHEP2022 :
>>>>
>>>
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICHEP-2022/Very-low-pT-di-muon-production-peripheral-AuAu-collisions%E2%80%A8-200-GeV-STAR
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>> Ziyang
>>>>
>>>> On 2023-02-20 00:18, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>> Hello Ziyang,
>>>>>
>>>>> Please find a few minor comments on your nice abstract.
>>>>>
>>>>> Not sure, if you have presented such measurement and discussed at
>>>
>>>>> HP-pwg.
>>>>> In case I missed it, can you please point to your precious
>>>>> presentations?
>>>>>
>>>>> Title:
>>>>> "Very low pT dimuon…" -> "Dimuon production at low transverse
>>> momentum
>>>>> in peripheral Au+Au…"
>>>>> Here no need to use "Very" and title needs rephrase as above.
>>>>> L2: "…photons, leading …" -"photons leading
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you
>>>>> Nihar
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On 2023-02-17 13:34, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material
>>> for a
>>>>>> review,
>>>>>> please have a look:
>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62633
>>>>>>
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