STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Tanmay,

Please find my comments on your nice slides.

Slide2:
You could merge bullet 4 and 5 into one make it "Jet shape observables"
You need to do rehearsal  if you can finish all these slides in 20min 
talk as there are many outline slides with subbullets.
Otherwise make adjustment as your convenience.

Slide4:
_ For a presentation, Footer is not encouraged as no one can see at the 
bottom.
Please place at visible places.

Slide5:
_ You do not say anything about kappa and beta.
_ "Note: g …" Please move as a sub-bullet under 1st bullet


Slide6:
"Previous measurements" -> "Previous measurements in Pb+Pb collisions"

Slide12:
The right event display is for Au+Au collision. It may be a bit 
confusing to show where you discuss pp data.
Same comment for footer as before.

Slide13:
What is cp_T,trk ?

"A_jet > 0.3" Make sure this is used correctly in your all plots.

Slide15:
No need to discuss again all the observables; you have done it in slide5
Mention what is IBU?

Slide16:
Can you show closure test of each of these 4 observables for one jet pT 
on one slide?

Slide17:
"added any small variations" why only small variation you consider as 
sys uncertainty?
"added any variations"

Cheers
Nihar








Cheers
Nihar






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