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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Tanmay,

thanks for the update, please see my comments below.

- Change the data to your talks' date

- s5: move "ALICE, JHEP 10 .." text up and the ALICE g plot down, so that all the ALICE plots are in one line

- s10: cpT,trk -> pT,trk

- s11: Analysis TL;DR -> Analysis

Try to shorten the text on this slide, e.g.

After calculating the jet observables, embedding simulation used for deconvoluting detector effects by mapping RECO → GEN -> Deconvoluting detector effects by mapping RECO → GEN using embedding simulation

For p D T , LeSub and Girth, said deconvolution achieved using 2D - Iterative bayesian unfolding of -> p D T , LeSub and Girth: 2D - Iterative bayesian unfolding of

Both deconvolution tactics passes closure tests -> Both deconvolution tactics pass closure tests (and you don't need the rest, put details to the backup)

- s13: move PYTHIA-8 conclusion adobe the plot, use bullets (also on other slides)

- s17, 18: use thicker lines for PYTHIA-8 predictions on pTD, LeSub and g plots, same as you have on the r plots.

- s18: Here we discussed that even pure QJ PYTHIA 8 doesn't describe the shape. Have you compared the PYTHIA 6 and PYTHIA 8 pT distributions so that we can fine tune the conclusions ?

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Mar 24, 2023 at 10:53 AM Tanmay Pani via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar, Barbara and Yi,

Thanks for your nice comments. Here is an updated version. 

HP2023.pdf

After few rehearsal runs, I decided to cut out most of the finer analysis details, as I was routinely clocking in over 20 minutes with those in. 

Thanks,

Tanmay 

On Fri, Mar 24, 2023 at 12:15 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Tanmay,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - p6, p7: Title, Previous measurements from LHC

 - p16, p23: If you don't have enough time, I would move these slides to backup 

Cheers,

Yi

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