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[Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>]

Hi Nihar,

Thank you very much! I have uploaded the new version with your nice comments implemented.

 Here is the new version, please find it at: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_Abstract_ver5.pdf

Best,

Dandan

发件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
发送日期：2023-06-22 15:47:37
收件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
抄送人：YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Wei <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova" <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
主题：Re: Merging of QM abstracts>Hello Dandan and PAs,
>
>Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
>
>
>J/ψ  -> $J/\psi$ all places
>
>L1-2: "Quarkonia and electrons from heavy-flavor are important probes to 
>the properties of the quark-gluon plasma (QGP) created in heavy-ion 
>collisions. " -> Quarkonia and heavy flavor decay electrons (HFE) are 
>important probes to study the properties of the quark-gluon plasma (QGP) 
>created in heavy-ion collisions.
>
>L2-3: "The production rate changes and the directional asymmetry of HFE 
>reflect heavy-quark …" Not clear, please rephrase it.
>
>L4-5:"Production of quarkonia involves several effects, including 
>dissociation and regeneration in the QGP …" -> "Production of quarkonia 
>depends on the dissociation and regeneration processes in the QGP, and 
>also on the cold nuclear matter effect."
>
>L6-8: "…it is desirable to carry out differential measurements for 
>different quarkonium states and collision energies with high precision. 
>" -> "… , it is important to carry out differential precision 
>measurements for various quarkonium states and at different collision 
>energies."
>
>L9: large-statistics -> large statistics
>
>L10: (9644Ru + 9644Ru and 9640Zr + 9640Zr) -> Please try \leftindex. 
>Reference here: 
>https://ctan.math.illinois.edu/macros/latex/contrib/leftindex/leftindex.pdf
>
>L11:  …obtained from… -> "… data collected in …"
>
>L13: In this contribution, … -> In this talk,.. (or just remove)
>
>L18:	of the yield suppression for J/ψ  and different Υ states -> of the 
>J/psi and \Upsilon states
>yield suppression …
>
>L19: binding energy-dependent  -> 	binding-energy dependent
>L20-21: "In addition, new measurements of J/ψ yields and nuclear 
>modification factors (RAA) in Au+Au different collision energies." -> 
>syntax issue, and No required, drop it. It is understood.
>
>
>L23: of Heavy Flavor Electrons (HFE)  -> of HFE
>
>L24:	What’s more, the first measurement -> What’s more—the first 
>measurement .. [such colloquial tone better to avoid, but it is Ok…]
>
>L25: …in both Helicity…frames,  which> … in both the Helicity… frames 
>which
>
>L27: …in these collisions. -> I think this measurement is for one 
>collision energy in Isobar. Is not it? If so, then remove it.
>
>
>
>Cheers
>Nihar
>
>
>
>On 2023-06-21 20:54, Dandan wrote:
>> Hi All,
>> 
>> This is our marge abstract for QM2023 , it can be found in this link:
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_Abstract_ver3.pdf
>> 
>> Best,
>> Dandan
>> 
>> 发件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
>> 发送日期：2023-06-20 11:37:39
>> 收件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
>> 抄送人：Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang
>> <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Wei <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova"
>> <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac
>> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>> 主题：Re:Re: Merging of QM abstracts
>> 
>>> Hi Nihar，
>>> 
>>> Thanks for your comment.
>>> We discuss and improve the marge abstract. I will send you a new
>>> version to you.
>>> 
>>> Best,
>>> Dandan
>>> 
>>> From: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
>>> Date: 2023-06-20 10:30:34
>>> To:  Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
>>> Cc:  Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang
>>> <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Wei
>>> <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova"
>>> <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac
>>> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>>> Subject: Re: Merging of QM abstracts>Hello PAs and Dandan,
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you for bringing this merged abstract.
>>>> This looks a bit long abstract, could you please make it a shorter
>>>> version?
>>>> As this is already an accepted by QM organizer and suggested for
>>> merging
>>>> then I think you can make it brief on each physics topics to make
>>> it
>>>> shorter. please try from your side first.
>>>> 
>>>> Cheers
>>>> Nihar
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> On 2023-06-19 19:40, Dandan wrote:
>>>>> Hi ,all
>>>>> 
>>>>> This is our marge abstract for QM2023 , it can be found in this
>>> link:
>>>>> 
>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023Abstract_0.pdf
>>>>> 
>>>>> Best,
>>>>> Dandan