STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Dandan and PAs,

Thank you for implementing my comments.
It is now in good shape.
I sign off.

Regards
Nihar


On 2023-06-23 06:36, Dandan wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thank you very much! I have uploaded the new version with your nice
> comments implemented.
>  Here is the new version, please find it at:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_Abstract_ver5.pdf
>
> Best,
> Dandan
>
> 发件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> 发送日期：2023-06-22 15:47:37
> 收件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
> 抄送人：YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac
> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Wei <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova"
> <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan
> Huang <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 主题：Re: Merging of QM abstracts>Hello Dandan and PAs,
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> >
> >
> > J/ψ  -> $J/\psi$ all places
> >
> > L1-2: "Quarkonia and electrons from heavy-flavor are important probes
> to
> > the properties of the quark-gluon plasma (QGP) created in heavy-ion
> > collisions. " -> Quarkonia and heavy flavor decay electrons (HFE) are
>
> > important probes to study the properties of the quark-gluon plasma
> (QGP)
> > created in heavy-ion collisions.
> >
> > L2-3: "The production rate changes and the directional asymmetry of
> HFE
> > reflect heavy-quark …" Not clear, please rephrase it.
> >
> > L4-5:"Production of quarkonia involves several effects, including
> > dissociation and regeneration in the QGP …" -> "Production of
> quarkonia
> > depends on the dissociation and regeneration processes in the QGP,
> and
> > also on the cold nuclear matter effect."
> >
> > L6-8: "…it is desirable to carry out differential measurements for
> > different quarkonium states and collision energies with high
> precision.
> > " -> "… , it is important to carry out differential precision
> > measurements for various quarkonium states and at different collision
>
> > energies."
> >
> > L9: large-statistics -> large statistics
> >
> > L10: (9644Ru + 9644Ru and 9640Zr + 9640Zr) -> Please try \leftindex.
> > Reference here:
> > https://ctan.math.illinois.edu/macros/latex/contrib/leftindex/leftindex.pdf
> [1]
> > L11:  …obtained from… -> "… data collected in …"
> >
> > L13: In this contribution, … -> In this talk,.. (or just remove)
> >
> > L18:    of the yield suppression for J/ψ  and different Υ states ->
> of the
> > J/psi and \Upsilon states
> > yield suppression …
> >
> > L19: binding energy-dependent  ->     binding-energy dependent
> > L20-21: "In addition, new measurements of J/ψ yields and nuclear
> > modification factors (RAA) in Au+Au different collision energies." ->
>
> > syntax issue, and No required, drop it. It is understood.
> >
> >
> > L23: of Heavy Flavor Electrons (HFE)  -> of HFE
> >
> > L24:    What’s more, the first measurement -> What’s more—the
> first
> > measurement .. [such colloquial tone better to avoid, but it is
> Ok…]
> > L25: …in both Helicity…frames,  which> … in both the
> Helicity… frames
> > which
> >
> > L27: …in these collisions. -> I think this measurement is for one
> > collision energy in Isobar. Is not it? If so, then remove it.
> >
> >
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> >
> >
> > On 2023-06-21 20:54, Dandan wrote:
> > > Hi All,
> > >
> > > This is our marge abstract for QM2023 , it can be found in this
> link:
> > >
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_Abstract_ver3.pdf
> > > Best,
> > > Dandan
> > >
> > > 发件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
> > > 发送日期：2023-06-20 11:37:39
> > > 收件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > 抄送人：Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang
> > > <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Wei
> <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova"
> > > <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac
> > > <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > > 主题：Re:Re: Merging of QM abstracts
> > >
> > > > Hi Nihar，
> > > >
> > > > Thanks for your comment.
> > > > We discuss and improve the marge abstract. I will send you a new
> > > > version to you.
> > > >
> > > > Best,
> > > > Dandan
> > > >
> > > > From: Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > > Date: 2023-06-20 10:30:34
> > > > To:  Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
> > > > Cc:  Yan <wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn>,Te-Chuan Huang
> > > > <tchuang AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Wei
> > > > <wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn>,"v.d.prozorova"
> > > > <v.d.prozorova AT gmail.com>,YiYang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>,Isaac
> > > > <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,HP <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > > > Subject: Re: Merging of QM abstracts>Hello PAs and Dandan,
> > > > > Thank you for bringing this merged abstract.
> > > > > This looks a bit long abstract, could you please make it a
> shorter
> > > > > version?
> > > > > As this is already an accepted by QM organizer and suggested for
> > > > merging
> > > > > then I think you can make it brief on each physics topics to make
> > > > it
> > > > > shorter. please try from your side first.
> > > > >
> > > > > Cheers
> > > > > Nihar
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > On 2023-06-19 19:40, Dandan wrote:
> > > > > > Hi ,all
> > > > > >
> > > > > > This is our marge abstract for QM2023 , it can be found in this
> > > > link:
> > > > > >
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023Abstract_0.pdf
> > > > > > Best,
> > > > > > Dandan
>
>
>
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