STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Andrew,

Your proceedings now in good shape.
A few additional minor comments below. I sign off.

Eq. 1:  \sum_{jets} -> make "jets" roman
79: for. - i.e. -> for — i.e. [use "em dash" instead of "-" ]

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-07-17 08:47, Andrew Tamis via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hello Isaac,
>
> Thank you for the comments, I have uploaded a new version and will
> submit it.
>
> Thank you,
> Andrew
>
> On Sun, Jul 16, 2023 at 2:34 PM Mooney, Isaac
> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu> wrote:
>
> > Hi Andrew,
> >
> > Thanks for addressing the comments. I have a few more tiny comments
> > below for your consideration, but I sign off.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Isaac
> >
> > Roman text on the descriptors (e.g. the “T,jet-low” subscript;
> > the GeV units; etc.)
> > Inline equations should use the "/" rather than the \frac{}{}. It
> > looks crammed otherwise. E.g. l. 50, 79, 97, 102, Fig. 2, etc.
> > You don’t need the “*" for multiplication. E.g. on l. 94, 99,
> > etc.
> > For Fig. 3 you can remove the first three lines of labels on the
> > right-hand plot (p+p…; Constituent p_T…; Jet R…).
> >
> > On Jul 15, 2023, at 2:36 PM, Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu>
> > wrote:
> >
> > Hello Isaac and Yi,
> >
> > Thank you for the comments, I have uploaded a new version
> > implementing them.  In updating figure 1 I also corrected a
> > mislabelling of it as 20-30, i was showing 30 to 50 GeV in this
> > plot.  To answer Yi's question, the two-point energy correlator is
> > also referred to as an Energy-energy correlator, which is where EEC
> > comes from.  EEC seems to be the most commonly used abbreviation in
> > the literature I have cited, so I elected to use that, while keeping
> > two-point energy correlator to show that it is a specific case of
> > the general N-point energy correlator.
> >
> > Thank you,
> > Andrew
> >
> > On Thu, Jul 13, 2023 at 10:29 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Andrew,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings, I only have some minor
> > comments on v2 for your consideration.
> > - My stupid question: why does EEC stand for the 2-point energy
> > correlator (the first E is for?)? Does TEC or 2EC make more sense?
> > - Title: add "by STAR"
> > - L7: full pT,jet --> full jet transverse momentum
> > - L26 - L29: sounds like there are 3 regions, this sentence is a
> > bit confusing to me.
> > - L44 - L46: I would move this sentence to L38 after BEMC,
> > otherwise the reader won't know why you mented TPC and BEMC...
> > - L48: I would move Eq. 1 before where Ei ... (add a comma in the
> > Eq.1)
> > - L51: need to mention the meaning of i and j
> > - Figure 1: is it possible to move it after L83?
> > - L61: add a reference for GEANT
> > - L78 - 83: It would be good to mention the level of systematic and
> > also point out which is the dominant one.
> > - L87: next-to-leading-log --> Next-to-Leading-Log (NLL)
> > - Figure 2: Next-to-leading-log-pQCD --> NLL-pQCD
> > Missed a period at the end.
> > - Figure 3: I would remove "15 < Jet pT < 20 GeV/c" and "30 < Jet
> > pT < 50 GeV/c" (the big ones) since they are already on the plots
> > (smaller black ones).
> > - L114 - L116: I think the transition region is also important,
> > right?
> > - L117: next-to-leading-log-pQCD --> NLL-pQCD
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > On Sun, Jul 2, 2023 at 9:58 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Andrew Tamis (andrew.tamis AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64225
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