STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Monika,

Thank you for implementing my comments. I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-07-15 03:34, Robotkova, Monika wrote:
> Hello Nihar,
>  Thank you very much for your comments, I've implemented them and
> uploaded v3 on Drupal page.
>
>  Best regards,
>  Monika
>
> -------------------------
>
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> Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Odesláno: pátek 14. července 2023 5:15
> Komu: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>; STAR HardProbes
> PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova for
> Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hello Monika,
>
> Sorry for being late.
> Please find my comments on your nice proceedings.
>
> Abstract:
> In particular, we explore… -> In these proceedings, we explore…
>
> L15: non-perturbative (hadronization) processes. -> non-perturbative
> QCD
> (hadronization) processes.  [here QCD is important]
>
> L24:    shared momentum fraction (𝑧g) and groomed radius 𝑅g  ->
> shared
> momentum fraction  and groomed radius  [as you already mentioned z_g
> and
> R_g]
>
> L26: study the different parts of Lund Plane [4]. ->study the
> kinematic
> region of Lund Plane [4].  [Same for L84 and L90]
> L28: To study the soft component of the jet usually removed by
> SoftDrop
> technique, CollinearDrop [5] is used. -> This stentence doesn't sound
> correct. Especially "CollinearDrop is used." for what?
>
> L33:     …angular observables it  ->      …angular observables, it
> i
> study mass observables -> study the jet mass observables
>
> L34: Mass observables -> The jet mass observables
>
> Eq.3 If you make "p_g" bold letter, then no need to use arrow on it.
> Remove arrow on p_g.
>
> L38:    of the subjet and 𝑀g is mass of the groomed jet.  -> of the
> subjet.
>
> L39: First observable Δ𝑀/𝑀 can provide the information about
> amount of
> mass groomed away -> First observable Δ𝑀/𝑀 provides the
> information
> about the amount of mass groomed away
>
> L42: 42 Analysed data were collected in 𝑝+𝑝 -> The p+p data were
>
> collected, in 2012, at sqrt(s) = 200 GeV by …
> L43: Since data are affected by the finite instrumental resolution,
> ->       Since the data are affected by the detector effects, …
> [here "finite
> instrumental resolution" doesn't make sense]
> L45:             For this purpose we use  two -> For this purpose, we
> use  the two
> … is (2+1)D unfolding -> What is "(2+1) D unfolding"? Do you mean 2D
> or
> 3D? Mention "by RooUnfold [ ]" in this sentence.
> L50:             on the y-axis and perform  ->            on the
> y-axis, and perform
> L82:             Since 0 value  -> Since the zero value
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
> On 2023-07-08 12:18, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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> >
> > Monika Robotkova (robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material
> for a
> > review, please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64281
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