STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Wei,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - Abstract: it looks like it has a bigger font size than other sections, could you please check and make them the same?

                   sqrt(SNN) --> sqrt(sNN)  ("s" should be in lower case.) 

 - STAR detector should go before the analysis procedure (especially before showing any data plots). It would be also nice to mention the dataset and selections you are using before it. 

 - Results and conclusions: 

        RAA --> R_AA

        sqrt(SNN) --> sqrt(sNN)  ("s" should be in lower case.) 

        Indicate what are the shedded areas in the RAA plots (bottom-left and top-right). 

Cheers,

Yi

On Sat, Aug 26, 2023 at 3:26 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review, 
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