STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Wei,

Very nice poster. Please see below for some comments from me. I sign off.

Thanks,
Isaac

> "The data collected from BES-II provide..." is not necessary. You've given 
> a very nice explanation in the first two bullets already. This one doesn't 
> add anything.
> Second bullet of Sec. 4: "GeV has"; last bullet: "In the future, we"
> Would be good to comment in reference to the last figure that these results 
> are consistent with the Pb+Pb results.
> Speaking of those results, it would be good to add the names of the 
> experiments to the legend, and citations for the data somewhere. Also did 
> you mean for the > 0.15 GeV/c and > 0 GeV/c results to have the same marker 
> color and style?
> Could add to the outlook a bit of motivation for this 17.3 GeV study, 
> something like making the sqrt{s} common between the SPS and RHIC data so 
> the role of the system size can be investigated?

> On Aug 29, 2023, at 2:30 AM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> Hello Wei,
>
> Thank you for implementing some of my suggestions.
> I don't see any bullet on your pp reference.
> I think this is important and you need to mention this, otherwise people 
> may be wondering where/how do you get pp baseline for BES-II.
>
> With these implemented, I sign off.
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
>
> On 2023-08-29 01:09, 张炜 via Star-hp-l wrote:
>> Hello Yi and Nihar,
>> Thanks for your very useful suggestion, I updated my poster：
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64944 [1]
>> Best,
>> Wei
>> ------------------ Original ------------------
>> From:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
>> Date:  Mon, Aug 28, 2023 11:40 AM
>> To:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
>> Cc:  "yiyang0429 AT gmail.com"<yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>;
>> "webmaster"<webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>;
>> Subject:  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark
>> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>> Hi Wei,
>> Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your
>> consideration.
>> - Abstract: it looks like it has a bigger font size than other
>> sections, could you please check and make them the same?
>>                   sqrt(SNN) --> sqrt(sNN)  ("s" should be in lower
>> case.)
>> - STAR detector should go before the analysis procedure (especially
>> before showing any data plots). It would be also nice to mention the
>> dataset and selections you are using before it.
>> - Results and conclusions:
>>        RAA --> R_AA
>>        sqrt(SNN) --> sqrt(sNN)  ("s" should be in lower case.)
>>        Indicate what are the shedded areas in the RAA plots
>> (bottom-left and top-right).
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>> On Sat, Aug 26, 2023 at 3:26 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>> Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
>>> review,
>>> please have a look:
>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64944
>>> Deadline: 2023-09-03
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