STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Wei,

Thank you for implementing some of my suggestions.
I don't see any bullet on your pp reference.
I think this is important and you need to mention this, otherwise people 
may be wondering where/how do you get pp baseline for BES-II.

With these implemented, I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-08-29 01:09, 张炜 via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hello Yi and Nihar,
>
> Thanks for your very useful suggestion, I updated my poster：
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64944 [1]
>
> Best,
> Wei
>
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> From:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
> Date:  Mon, Aug 28, 2023 11:40 AM
> To:  "STAR HardProbes PWG"<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
> Cc:  "yiyang0429 AT gmail.com"<yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>;
> "webmaster"<webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>;
> Subject:  Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Wei Zhang for Quark
> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hi Wei,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your
> consideration.
>  - Abstract: it looks like it has a bigger font size than other
> sections, could you please check and make them the same?
>                    sqrt(SNN) --> sqrt(sNN)  ("s" should be in lower
> case.)
>  - STAR detector should go before the analysis procedure (especially
> before showing any data plots). It would be also nice to mention the
> dataset and selections you are using before it.
>  - Results and conclusions:
>         RAA --> R_AA
>         sqrt(SNN) --> sqrt(sNN)  ("s" should be in lower case.)
>         Indicate what are the shedded areas in the RAA plots
> (bottom-left and top-right).
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> On Sat, Aug 26, 2023 at 3:26 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Wei Zhang (wzhang AT m.scnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64944
> >
> > Deadline: 2023-09-03
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