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[Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>]

Hi Rongrong,

Thanks for your nice comments.

Please find the new version in the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_2.pdf

Best,

Dandan

发件人："Ma, Rongrong" <marr AT bnl.gov>
发送日期：2023-08-30 12:58:37
收件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
抄送人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>,Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Qian <yangqian2020 AT sdu.edu.cn>,"nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hello Dandan

Thanks for addressing my comments. I have a few final ones: 

ABSTRACT

- remove ", as well as with respect to the event-plane, " since you do not show them

MOTIVATION AND INTRODUCTION

- can alter -> can potentially alter

ANALYSIS PROCEDURE

- tuning of J/psi distribution according to data -> tuning of J/psi polarization in simulation according to data

Best

Rongrong

On Aug 29, 2023, at 4:57 PM, Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Rongrong, Isaac and Yi,

Thanks for your nice comments.

Here is the new version. Please find it in the Link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_1.pdf

Best,

Dandan

发件人：Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
发送日期：2023-08-29 18:26:26
收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
抄送人：Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Dandan,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some very minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: you can remove all the "periods" since some of the items are not a complete sentence. 

 - Title: the bar for the sqrt() is not aligned well. 

 - Abstract: the bar for the sqrt() is a bit thicker. 

 - Motivation: extra space between feed-down and structure? 

 - Analysis procedure: 

     - "Iterative procedure" should be in bold and an item 

     - Figure2 --> Figure 2  (miss a space) 

- Results and Conclusions: 

     - No captions for these two plots, please add (or move the captions for Figure 1 and 2)

     - no pT dependence --> no obvious pT dependence  

     - Remove the question mark

Cheers,

Yi 

  

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