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["Ma, Rongrong" <marr AT bnl.gov>]

Hello Dandan

Thanks for addressing my comments. Your new version reads nice to me. I do not have any further comments. 

Best

Rongrong

On Aug 30, 2023, at 10:48 AM, Dandan via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar，

Thank you for your reminder.

Here is new version. Please find it in the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v5.pdf

You can find the definitions of λ_phi and λ_inv in the motivation figure and formula .

Best，

Dandan

发件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
发送日期：2023-08-30 13:49:32
收件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
抄送人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>,Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Qian <yangqian2020 AT sdu.edu.cn>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review>Hello Dandan,
>
>Can you please check again if you have implemented or sent correct link?
>
>Cheers
>Nihar
>
>On 2023-08-30 11:15, Dandan wrote:
>> Hi Nihar,
>> 
>> Thanks for your nice comments.
>> Please find my new version in the link:
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_2.pdf
>> 
>> Best,
>> Dandan
>> 
>> 发件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
>> 发送日期：2023-08-30 13:25:03
>> 收件人："Ma, Rongrong" <marr AT bnl.gov>
>> 抄送人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>,STAR HardProbes PWG
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>,Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,Isaac
>> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Qian <yangqian2020 AT sdu.edu.cn>
>> 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark
>> Matter 2023 submitted for review>Hello Dandan,
>>> 
>>> Please find my comments on your nice poster. With these implemented I
>> 
>>> sign off.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Motivation and Introduction:
>>> 
>>> _ You have not define what is "Lambda_psi" in Lambda_inv _expression_?
>>> Please mention it.
>>> 
>>> Analysis Procedure:
>>> _ "...   ..." -> ...  and
>>> 
>>> Results and Conclusions:
>>> _ _inv as a function of T and centrality are consistent between HX
>> and
>>> CS frames
>>>    -> _inv as a function of T and centrality are consistent between
>> HX
>>> and CS frames, and their values are zero, within uncertainty.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Cheers
>>> Nihar
>>> 
>>> On 2023-08-30 10:28, Ma, Rongrong wrote:
>>>> Hello Dandan
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks for addressing my comments. I have a few final ones:
>>>> 
>>>> ABSTRACT
>>>> - remove ", as well as with respect to the event-plane, " since you
>> do
>>>> not show them
>>>> 
>>>> MOTIVATION AND INTRODUCTION
>>>> - can alter -> can potentially alter
>>>> 
>>>> ANALYSIS PROCEDURE
>>>> - tuning of J/psi distribution according to data -> tuning of J/psi
>>>> polarization in simulation according to data
>>>> 
>>>> Best
>>>> Rongrong
>>>> 
>>>>> On Aug 29, 2023, at 4:57 PM, Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Rongrong, Isaac and Yi,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks for your nice comments.
>>>>> Here is the new version. Please find it in the Link:
>>>>> 
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_1.pdf
>>>>> 
>>>>> Best,
>>>>> Dandan
>>>>> 
>>>>> 发件人：Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>>>>> 发送日期：2023-08-29 18:26:26
>>>>> 收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>>>>> 抄送人：Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
>>>>> 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for
>> Quark
>>>>> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Dandan,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some very minor comments
>>>>> for your consideration.
>>>>> - General: you can remove all the "periods" since some of the
>> items
>>>>> are not a complete sentence.
>>>>> - Title: the bar for the sqrt() is not aligned well.
>>>>> - Abstract: the bar for the sqrt() is a bit thicker.
>>>>> - Motivation: extra space between feed-down and structure?
>>>>> - Analysis procedure:
>>>>> - "Iterative procedure" should be in bold and an item
>>>>> - Figure2 --> Figure 2  (miss a space)
>>>>> - Results and Conclusions:
>>>>> - No captions for these two plots, please add (or move the
>>>>> captions for Figure 1 and 2)
>>>>> - no pT dependence --> no obvious pT dependence
>>>>> - Remove the question mark
>>>>> 
>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>> Yi
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Tue, Aug 22, 2023 at 6:00 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
>>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Dandan Shen (shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn) has submitted a material
>>>>> for a
>>>>> review, please have a look:
>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64806
>>>>> 
>>>>> Deadline: 2023-09-03
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