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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Dandan,

Thanks a lot for the updated one. It looks great!

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Aug 30, 2023 at 10:50 PM Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn> wrote:

Hi Yi，

Thank for your nice comment. I have removed the extra space.

Please find the new version in the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_6.pdf

Best,

Dandan

发件人：Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>
发送日期：2023-08-30 23:39:26
收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
抄送人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>,Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Hi Dandan,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I don't have any further comments on it, except could you please check if you have an extra space in front of "TPC" in the very last bullet (Outlook)?

Cheers,

Yi 

On Wed, Aug 30, 2023 at 9:49 AM Dandan via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar，

Thank you for your reminder.

Here is new version. Please find it in the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v5.pdf

You can find the definitions of λ_phi and λ_inv in the motivation figure and formula .

Best，

Dandan

发件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
发送日期：2023-08-30 13:49:32
收件人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
抄送人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>,Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Qian <yangqian2020 AT sdu.edu.cn>
主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review>Hello Dandan,
>
>Can you please check again if you have implemented or sent correct link?
>
>Cheers
>Nihar
>
>On 2023-08-30 11:15, Dandan wrote:
>> Hi Nihar,
>> 
>> Thanks for your nice comments.
>> Please find my new version in the link:
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_2.pdf
>> 
>> Best,
>> Dandan
>> 
>> 发件人：Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
>> 发送日期：2023-08-30 13:25:03
>> 收件人："Ma, Rongrong" <marr AT bnl.gov>
>> 抄送人：Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>,STAR HardProbes PWG
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>,Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,Isaac
>> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>,Qian <yangqian2020 AT sdu.edu.cn>
>> 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for Quark
>> Matter 2023 submitted for review>Hello Dandan,
>>> 
>>> Please find my comments on your nice poster. With these implemented I
>> 
>>> sign off.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Motivation and Introduction:
>>> 
>>> _ You have not define what is "Lambda_psi" in Lambda_inv _expression_?
>>> Please mention it.
>>> 
>>> Analysis Procedure:
>>> _ "...   ..." -> ...  and
>>> 
>>> Results and Conclusions:
>>> _ _inv as a function of T and centrality are consistent between HX
>> and
>>> CS frames
>>>    -> _inv as a function of T and centrality are consistent between
>> HX
>>> and CS frames, and their values are zero, within uncertainty.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Cheers
>>> Nihar
>>> 
>>> On 2023-08-30 10:28, Ma, Rongrong wrote:
>>>> Hello Dandan
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks for addressing my comments. I have a few final ones:
>>>> 
>>>> ABSTRACT
>>>> - remove ", as well as with respect to the event-plane, " since you
>> do
>>>> not show them
>>>> 
>>>> MOTIVATION AND INTRODUCTION
>>>> - can alter -> can potentially alter
>>>> 
>>>> ANALYSIS PROCEDURE
>>>> - tuning of J/psi distribution according to data -> tuning of J/psi
>>>> polarization in simulation according to data
>>>> 
>>>> Best
>>>> Rongrong
>>>> 
>>>>> On Aug 29, 2023, at 4:57 PM, Dandan <shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Rongrong, Isaac and Yi,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks for your nice comments.
>>>>> Here is the new version. Please find it in the Link:
>>>>> 
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Dandan_QM2023_v4_1.pdf
>>>>> 
>>>>> Best,
>>>>> Dandan
>>>>> 
>>>>> 发件人：Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>>>>> 发送日期：2023-08-29 18:26:26
>>>>> 收件人：STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>>>>> 抄送人：Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>,webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
>>>>> 主题：Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Dandan Shen for
>> Quark
>>>>> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Dandan,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some very minor comments
>>>>> for your consideration.
>>>>> - General: you can remove all the "periods" since some of the
>> items
>>>>> are not a complete sentence.
>>>>> - Title: the bar for the sqrt() is not aligned well.
>>>>> - Abstract: the bar for the sqrt() is a bit thicker.
>>>>> - Motivation: extra space between feed-down and structure?
>>>>> - Analysis procedure:
>>>>> - "Iterative procedure" should be in bold and an item
>>>>> - Figure2 --> Figure 2  (miss a space)
>>>>> - Results and Conclusions:
>>>>> - No captions for these two plots, please add (or move the
>>>>> captions for Figure 1 and 2)
>>>>> - no pT dependence --> no obvious pT dependence
>>>>> - Remove the question mark
>>>>> 
>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>> Yi
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Tue, Aug 22, 2023 at 6:00 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
>>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Dandan Shen (shendandan AT mail.sdu.edu.cn) has submitted a material
>>>>> for a
>>>>> review, please have a look:
>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64806
>>>>> 
>>>>> Deadline: 2023-09-03
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