STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Dandan,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some very minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: you can remove all the "periods" since some of the items are not a complete sentence. 

 - Title: the bar for the sqrt() is not aligned well. 

 - Abstract: the bar for the sqrt() is a bit thicker. 

 - Motivation: extra space between feed-down and structure? 

 - Analysis procedure: 

     - "Iterative procedure" should be in bold and an item 

     - Figure2 --> Figure 2  (miss a space) 

- Results and Conclusions: 

     - No captions for these two plots, please add (or move the captions for Figure 1 and 2)

     - no pT dependence --> no obvious pT dependence  

     - Remove the question mark

Cheers,

Yi 

  

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