sPHENIX is a new detector at RHIC.

[Oliver Suranyi <osuranyi AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Thank you Megan for the feedback!
I updated the poster, attached the new version.

Best,
Oliver

On 2023-06-14 14:45, Megan Connors wrote:
> Dear Oliver,
>
> Thanks Oliver for the updated poster. It looks great. I have a few
> minor suggestions for you to consider before printing.
>
> Intro:
> -“overlaps those” to “overlaps with those”
> -Subscript T in pT
>
> -Change the HCal photo's caption to “OHCal, magnet, and IHCal”
>
> -I was thinking you could make the title “Recent results from
> commissioning” a bit more exciting. Even just changing to “First
> results from commissioning data!” Sounds better in my opinion or
> make it a different color to highlight it more.
>
> -Change “Jet physics predictions” to “Jet physics projections”
>
> Best,
>
> -Megan
>
> On Wed, Jun 14, 2023 at 12:04 PM Oliver Suranyi via sPHENIX-l
> <sphenix-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear Ejiro, Dennis, all,
> >
> > Thank you very much for the feedback!
> > I updated the poster based on your suggestions.
> > If you have any additional comments, let me know until 5pm, because
> > I
> > have to submit the poster for printing today.
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Oliver
> >
> > On 2023-06-07 20:00, Ejiro Umaka wrote:
> > > Hi Oliver,
> > >
> > > Nice poster. I have few comments. Please see below:
> > >
> > > In the top right plot titled Calibration of the outer oHCAL with
> > > cosmic muons. I would change the wording a bit, because this is
> > not
> > > finalized, it was a step to see if the cosmic muon simulation
> > > generates a shape similar to the data. Also the set up was with
> > the
> > > entire oHCAL. I assume the finalized calibration should involve a
> > > tower by tower calibration.
> > >
> > > A small cosmetic change will be useful for the plot right below
> > > showing a correlation between the outer and inner hcal. The
> > distance
> > > of the x-axis title to the x-axis is not the same distance as in
> > the
> > > y-axis. Although the appropriate persons have been notified, I
> > leave
> > > this here since there was another presentation from sPHENIX with
> > the
> > > same plot at the same conference.
> > >
> > > For the sPHENIX detector, are you against using the one here:
> > > https://www.sphenix.bnl.gov
> > > This way there is no need for the text stating that the sEPD and
> > MBD
> > > are not depicted.
> > >
> > > Right below the sPHENIX detector, I believe we agreed that
> > simulations
> > > should be named sPHENIX simulation not sPHENIX G4 Sim.
> > > Following up on these plots, is there a need to state that the
> > > underlying event subtraction does not include flow? Does the
> > audience
> > > care? I also have trouble reconciling showing the centrality
> > > dependence in the jet energy scale at low pT- is the point to say
> > we
> > > don't have our UE subtraction under control in this range?
> > >
> > > In the jet physics predictions section what does the audience gain
> > by
> > > stating: most theoretical models have not been able to
> > simultaneously
> > > describe the RAA and v2? Can you make your point clearer?
> > >
> > > Lastly, in the R-dependence of the RAA, it might be useful to
> > change
> > > the wording from sPHENIX can make an accurate measurement in this
> > > region to something like sPHENIX measurement will cover this
> > kinematic
> > > region and help to reduce the tension between the ALICE and ATLAS
> > > measurements. I think using "accurate", while I'm confident with
> > what
> > > will be done at sPHENIX, the statement may appear too strong and
> > may
> > > imply that the other LHC measurements might be inaccurate.
> > >
> > > Best regards,
> > > Ejiro
> > >
> > > On Wed, Jun 7, 2023 at 2:24 PM Oliver Suranyi via sPHENIX-l
> > > <sphenix-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > >
> > > > Dear Colleagues,
> > > >
> > > > I will bring a poster to the Initial Stages 2023 conference (June
> > > > 19-23).
> > > > I attached the draft version of the poster to this mail.
> > > > Let me know if you have any comments by June 14, so I will have
> > time
> > > > to
> > > > print the final poster.
> > > >
> > > > Best regards,
> > > > Oliver
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