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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review

From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
To: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
Cc: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
Subject: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review
Date: Thu, 21 Nov 2024 11:22:52 +0800

Dear Qiang,

Since you haven't received further suggestions, I pushed it to star-talks.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2024-11-18 04:37 PM, 胡强 wrote:

Dear Subhash,
Thank you for your nice comments. I have updated the proceedings and
uploaded to the drupal in the same place. Please be kindly to have a
look.

Best regards,

Qiang Hu

> -----原始邮件-----
> 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> 发送时间: 2024-11-18 13:56:28 (星期一)
> 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for
SQM-2024 submitted for review
>
> Dear Qiang,
>
> Thanks for sharing. I have one additional suggestion: as suggested by
> referee, please unify the notation for example use either <p_{2,y}> or
> P_{2, y} same for P2z across the proceedings, including figures (Y-axis
> labels), main text, footnote etc. I am good otherwise
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
>
>
> On 2024-11-16 09:38 AM, 胡强 wrote:
> > Dear Suhash,
> > The comments are shown as follow:
> >
> > REVIEWER 1:
> > Three minor corrections are proposed:
> >
> > In "3 Results and discussion":
> > - please use plural so it reads: "Upper limits on the late-stage..."
> > - in order to make sure the footnote tag is not at the beginning of
> > the line, either locate it just after "-P^{net}_{2,y}" or remove "The"
> > at the beginning of the former sentence so it simply reads "...
> > dependence. Left and right panels...".
> >
> > References: (only initial should be used instead of full first name)
> > - reference [5] should read "J.~Chen et al, arXiv:2407.02935[nucl-ex].
> >
> > -----------
> > REVIEWER 2:
> > Figures :
> > *** The figures are very small. They can be enlarged, and the captions
> > can be moved below the figures.
> > *** Fig. 1: in caption and on axis: ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩obs; in the text:
> > ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩ (without „obs”)
> > *** Fig. 2: not clear how P_y [%] was obtained; previoulsy <p_y> used;
> > the same concerns P_H [%] and quantities in Figs. 3 and 4
> > *** Fig. 2 labels (if change possible): [%] → (%) Energy [GeV] →
> > \sqrt{s_{NN}} (GeV) *** Captions of Figs. 2, 3, 4: Vertical line →
> > Vertical lines
> >
> > Extra comments:
> > *** abstract: 7.7 - 27 GeV → 7.7 -- 27 GeV ** P2,z (Λ̄ ⟩) → P2,z (Λ̄ )
> > ⟩ (averaging at the end)
> > *** line after Eq. (2): ϕ*_p was already defined (page 1)
> > ** next line: ⟨(cosθ∗_p )^2⟩ should be probably (cosθ∗_p )^2; meaning
> > of ⟨...⟩ should be explained
> > *** 2nd line before Sec. 2: Pnet2,y,z had different notation (mean
> > difference vs. difference of means) than in abstract → should be
> > unified
> > *** Sec. 2: In these proceedings, we analyzed → In these proceedings,
> > we present/report
> > *** 19.6 and 27 GeV → 19.6, and 27 GeV ** Time of Projection Chamber →
> > Time Projection Chamber ** Pz was not defined
> > *** invariant mass as shown → invariant mass (M_inv) as shown
> > *** two notations used: „sig” and „Sig”
> > *** Sec. 3: panels of Fig. 2 present → panels of Fig.
\ref{...} present
> > *** The whole paper, including figures and figure captions: please try
> > to unify the notations; the reader may be a bit lost by different
> > notations, for example: <p2,y>, P2,y, P2,y (%)
> > *** page 2, footnote: Pnet2,y has a different notation than in the
> > abstract
> > *** page 4: Acknowledgement → Acknowledgements (?)
> > *** Order of references: Ref. [6] should go after Ref. [9]
> >
> >
> > Based on the above comments, I updated the errors and plots.
> >
> > Best regards,
> >
> > Qiang Hu
> >
> > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > 发送时间: 2024-11-15 17:27:05 (星期五)
> > > 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> > > 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for
> > SQM-2024 submitted for review
> > >
> > > Dear Qiang,
> > >
> > > I believe these are updated proceedings after incorporating
> > referee's
> > > comments. Could you please share what are the comments from
> > referee(s)
> > > and major modifications here?
> > >
> > > Thanks and regards,
> > > Subhash
> > >
> > > On 2024-11-15 04:47 PM, 胡强 wrote:
> > > > Dear Conveners,
> > > > Could you please have a look of my SQM-2024 proceedings?
> > > > It can be found from the link:
> > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
> > > >
> > > > Best regards,
> > > >
> > > > Qiang Hu
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > > > 发件人: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > > > > 发送时间: 2024-11-01 16:49:14 (星期五)
> > > > > 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > > > 抄送:
> > > > > 主题: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for
> > SQM-2024
> > > > submitted for review
> > > > >
> > > > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > >
> > > > > Qiang Hu (qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn) has submitted
a material
> > for a
> > > > review, please
> > > > > have a look:
> > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
> > > > >
> > > > > ---
> > > > > If you have any problems with the review
process, please
> > contact
> > > > > webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov
> > </qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn></subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov></p2,y></p_y>
</p_{2,y}></qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn></subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>

[[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review, webmaster, 11/01/2024
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