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Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review

From: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
To: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
Subject: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024 submitted for review
Date: Thu, 21 Nov 2024 14:15:27 +0800 (GMT+08:00)

Dear Subhash,
Thanks a lot.

Best regards,

Qiang Hu

> -----Original Messages-----
> From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> Sent Time: 2024-11-21 11:22:52 (Thursday)
> To: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> Cc: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> Subject: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for SQM-2024
submitted for review
>
> Dear Qiang,
>
> Since you haven't received further suggestions, I pushed it to
> star-talks.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2024-11-18 04:37 PM, 胡强 wrote:
> > Dear Subhash,
> > Thank you for your nice comments. I have updated the proceedings and
> > uploaded to the drupal in the same place. Please be kindly to have a
> > look.
> >
> > Best regards,
> >
> > Qiang Hu
> >
> >
> > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > 发送时间: 2024-11-18 13:56:28 (星期一)
> > > 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> > > 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang Hu for
> > SQM-2024 submitted for review
> > >
> > > Dear Qiang,
> > >
> > > Thanks for sharing. I have one additional suggestion: as
suggested
> > by
> > > referee, please unify the notation for example use either
> > <p_{2,y}> or
> > > P_{2, y} same for P2z across the proceedings, including
figures
> > (Y-axis
> > > labels), main text, footnote etc. I am good otherwise
> > >
> > > Thanks and regards,
> > > Subhash
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > On 2024-11-16 09:38 AM, 胡强 wrote:
> > > > Dear Suhash,
> > > > The comments are shown as follow:
> > > >
> > > > REVIEWER 1:
> > > > Three minor corrections are proposed:
> > > >
> > > > In "3 Results and discussion":
> > > > - please use plural so it reads: "Upper limits on the
> > late-stage..."
> > > > - in order to make sure the footnote tag is not at the
> > beginning of
> > > > the line, either locate it just after "-P^{net}_{2,y}" or
> > remove "The"
> > > > at the beginning of the former sentence so it simply
reads
> > "...
> > > > dependence. Left and right panels...".
> > > >
> > > > References: (only initial should be used instead of full
> > first name)
> > > > - reference [5] should read "J.~Chen et al,
> > arXiv:2407.02935[nucl-ex].
> > > >
> > > > -----------
> > > > REVIEWER 2:
> > > > Figures :
> > > > *** The figures are very small. They can be enlarged, and
the
> > captions
> > > > can be moved below the figures.
> > > > *** Fig. 1: in caption and on axis: ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩obs;
in
> > the text:
> > > > ⟨Pz sin(2Deltaϕ)⟩ (without „obs”)
> > > > *** Fig. 2: not clear how P_y [%] was obtained;
previoulsy
> > <p_y> used;
> > > > the same concerns P_H [%] and quantities in Figs. 3 and 4
> > > > *** Fig. 2 labels (if change possible): [%] → (%) Energy
> > [GeV] →
> > > > \sqrt{s_{NN}} (GeV) *** Captions of Figs. 2, 3, 4:
Vertical
> > line →
> > > > Vertical lines
> > > >
> > > > Extra comments:
> > > > *** abstract: 7.7 - 27 GeV → 7.7 -- 27 GeV ** P2,z (Λ̄ ⟩)
→
> > P2,z (Λ̄ )
> > > > ⟩ (averaging at the end)
> > > > *** line after Eq. (2): ϕ*_p was already defined (page 1)
> > > > ** next line: ⟨(cosθ∗_p )^2⟩ should be probably (cosθ∗_p
)^2;
> > meaning
> > > > of ⟨...⟩ should be explained
> > > > *** 2nd line before Sec. 2: Pnet2,y,z had different
notation
> > (mean
> > > > difference vs. difference of means) than in abstract →
should
> > be
> > > > unified
> > > > *** Sec. 2: In these proceedings, we analyzed → In these
> > proceedings,
> > > > we present/report
> > > > *** 19.6 and 27 GeV → 19.6, and 27 GeV ** Time of
Projection
> > Chamber →
> > > > Time Projection Chamber ** Pz was not defined
> > > > *** invariant mass as shown → invariant mass (M_inv) as
shown
> > > > *** two notations used: „sig” and „Sig”
> > > > *** Sec. 3: panels of Fig. 2 present → panels of Fig.
> > \ref{...} present
> > > > *** The whole paper, including figures and figure
captions:
> > please try
> > > > to unify the notations; the reader may be a bit lost by
> > different
> > > > notations, for example: <p2,y>, P2,y, P2,y (%)
> > > > *** page 2, footnote: Pnet2,y has a different notation
than
> > in the
> > > > abstract
> > > > *** page 4: Acknowledgement → Acknowledgements (?)
> > > > *** Order of references: Ref. [6] should go after Ref. [9]
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Based on the above comments, I updated the errors and
plots.
> > > >
> > > > Best regards,
> > > >
> > > > Qiang Hu
> > > >
> > > > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > > > 发件人: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > > > 发送时间: 2024-11-15 17:27:05 (星期五)
> > > > > 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > > > 抄送: 胡强 <qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn>
> > > > > 主题: Re: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by Qiang
Hu
> > for
> > > > SQM-2024 submitted for review
> > > > >
> > > > > Dear Qiang,
> > > > >
> > > > > I believe these are updated proceedings after
> > incorporating
> > > > referee's
> > > > > comments. Could you please share what are the
comments
> > from
> > > > referee(s)
> > > > > and major modifications here?
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks and regards,
> > > > > Subhash
> > > > >
> > > > > On 2024-11-15 04:47 PM, 胡强 wrote:
> > > > > > Dear Conveners,
> > > > > > Could you please have a look of my SQM-2024
> > proceedings?
> > > > > > It can be found from the link:
> > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Best regards,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Qiang Hu
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > > > > > 发件人: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > > > > > > 发送时间: 2024-11-01 16:49:14 (星期五)
> > > > > > > 收件人: star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > > > > > 抄送:
> > > > > > > 主题: [[Star-fcv-l] ] STAR presentation by
Qiang
> > Hu for
> > > > SQM-2024
> > > > > > submitted for review
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Qiang Hu (qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn) has
submitted
> > a material
> > > > for a
> > > > > > review, please
> > > > > > > have a look:
> > > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69831
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > ---
> > > > > > > If you have any problems with the review
> > process, please
> > > > contact
> > > > > > > webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov
> > > >
> > </qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn></subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov></p2,y></p_y>
> > </p_{2,y}></qianghu AT impcas.ac.cn></subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
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