STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>]

Hi Priyanka,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - Titiel: Au-Au --> Au+Au

 - Motivation block: 

    - (Fig. 1) --> Fig. 1: Area of homogeneity  

    - Figure 2 has a grey background, is it on purpose? 

    - Remove (fig. 2) 

 - Methodology block:   

    - where, --> where  (two places) 

 - Experiment block: 

    - Plot 1, 2 should be "Fig. 6 (a) and (b) or left and right 

    - PID via combo measurement --> PID via combined measurement  

 - Analysis block:   

    - Plot 3, 4 should be Fig. 7 (a) and (b) or left and right. Also there are strange edges on these plots 

       Do you want to show a plot for pT < 1 GeV to support your point "for pT < 1 GeV, background is dominant over D0 signal."? 

        Also "for pT < 1 GeV, background is dominant over D0 signal." --> , and background is dominant over D0 signal for pT < 1 GeV." .

    - Fig 6 --> Fig. 8

    - It is a bit difficult to read the part of "Detector effects corrections", you can try to use bullets. 

    - "We can't predict..."  --> "No prediction on the correlation shape is available so far and it will be the first measurement"    

Cheers,

Yi

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On Tue, Mar 21, 2023 at 3:28 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Priyanka Roy Chowdhury (priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl) has submitted 
a material for a review, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63036

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