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[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka,

Thank you for updating your poster.
I don't have any further comments.

I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2023-03-23 22:37, Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Barbara and all,
>
>  Thanks for your comments. Please find my updated poster v6 with the
> implementation of all suggestions. I have increased the label and axis
> title size and legend text size as well. I have kept the stat box, if
> it looks clumsy, please let me know, and I can remove the stat box if
> required.
>  https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP2023_poster_v6.pdf
>
>  Regards,
>  Priyanka
>
> -------------------------
>
> From: Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
> Sent: Thursday, March 23, 2023 1:12 PM
> To: Yi Yang <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>; STAR HardProbes PWG
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Cc: Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT)
> <priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl>
> Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury
> for Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
>
> Hi Priyanka.
>
> I sign off with a few minor comments to be addressed.
>
> General:
>
> - Use consistent size of the bullets, like you have in your Motivation
> section.
> - Use (or not) consistently dots at the end of your sentences.
>
> Abstract
> - We will present a study -> We present an ongoing study
>
> Section IV
> - Improve quality of the plots. Increase the font of the axis, legend
> and the text inside the plot. You don't need all the information in
> the statistical box.
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Thu, Mar 23, 2023 at 11:47 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hi Priyanka,
> >
> > Please upload your updated version to this request:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63036
> > (Don't submit a new request.)
> >
> > I don't have any further comments on your v5 except a very minor
> > one:
> > - D0 reconstruction: Distance of Closest Approach, the "d)" is off
> > a bit.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> > Yi Yang, Professor
> > Department of Physics /
> > Director of Science Education Center
> > National Cheng Kung University
> > Tainan, 701 Taiwan
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> >
> > On Wed, Mar 22, 2023 at 12:43 PM Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT) via
> > Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Yi,
> >
> > Thanks for your comments and suggestions. I have implemented and
> > updated my poster.
> >
> > Regards,
> > Priyanka
> >
> > -------------------------
> >
> > From: Star-hp-l <star-hp-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of Yi
> > Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Sent: Wednesday, March 22, 2023 11:00 AM
> > To: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>; STAR HardProbes
> > PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Subject: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Priyanka Roy Chowdhury
> > for Hard Probes 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Priyanka,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for
> > your consideration.
> > - Titiel: Au-Au --> Au+Au
> > - Motivation block:
> > - (Fig. 1) --> Fig. 1: Area of homogeneity
> > - Figure 2 has a grey background, is it on purpose?
> > - Remove (fig. 2)
> > - Methodology block:
> > - where, --> where  (two places)
> > - Experiment block:
> > - Plot 1, 2 should be "Fig. 6 (a) and (b) or left and right
> > - PID via combo measurement --> PID via combined measurement
> > - Analysis block:
> > - Plot 3, 4 should be Fig. 7 (a) and (b) or left and right. Also
> > there are strange edges on these plots
> > Do you want to show a plot for pT < 1 GeV to support your
> > point "for pT < 1 GeV, background is dominant over D0 signal."?
> > Also "for pT < 1 GeV, background is dominant over D0
> > signal." --> , and background is dominant over D0 signal for pT < 1
> > GeV." .
> > - Fig 6 --> Fig. 8
> > - It is a bit difficult to read the part of "Detector effects
> > corrections", you can try to use bullets.
> > - "We can't predict..."  --> "No prediction on the correlation
> > shape is available so far and it will be the first measurement"
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> > Yi Yang, Professor
> > Department of Physics /
> > Director of Science Education Center
> > National Cheng Kung University
> > Tainan, 701 Taiwan
> > E-Mail: yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw
> > Tel: +886-6-2757575 ext.65237
> > Fax: +886-6-2747995
> > Group Web: http://phys.ncku.edu.tw/~yiyang [2]
> > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> >
> > On Tue, Mar 21, 2023 at 3:28 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Priyanka Roy Chowdhury (priyanka.roy_chowdhury.dokt AT pw.edu.pl) has
> > submitted
> > a material for a review, please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63036
> >
> > Deadline: 2023-03-26
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