STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Ziyang,

very nice poster. Please see below my comments.

- General: improve the quality of the plots. I would also suggest increasing the font size.

Introduction: 

- "Evidence of photon interactions ... " - use the same font size as for the rest of the text.

- Dimuon channel measurements provide additional statistics -> Dimuon channel measurements complement the previous results from dielectron channel

- Add reference to the plots. Move the text that is below to the figures to the top.

Muon PID at STAR:

- "Au+Au ..." text on the 1/beta figure is not well visible, either move it or use a different color. 

J/psi measurements:

- "The invariant yield (left) ... " and "The p_T^2 distribution of J/psi yield (left) ... " - you can move this text to the figures' captions, in this way you will have more space to increase the font size in other places. 

- consistent with EPA calculation. [4] -> consistent with EPA calculations [4].

μ+μ- continuum measurements:

- "The μ+μ- excess yields as a function of invariant mass (right)" and "The p_T^2 distribution of excess yield (left) ... "- same as before, you can move this text to the figures' captions, in this way you will have more space to increase the font size in other places. 

- as a function of invariant mass (right) ->  as a function of invariant mass (left)

- in peripheral collisions. -> in peripheral collisions (right).

- delta phi distribution(right) -> delta phi distribution (right), in peripheral collisions

- It would be good to define delta phi

Summary:

- The data are comparable with the EPA calculations indicating -> The EPA calculations can describe the data indicating

- Provide the experimental confirmation of the EPA predictions and can be used to map -> Can be used to map

Cheers,

Barbara

On Thu, Apr 13, 2023 at 3:03 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Nihar,

Sorry for the mistake, and thank you for the help.
But I haven't found your comments in this link, did I miss something?

Best,
Ziyang

On 2023-04-12 18:21, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hello Ziyang,
>
> I can see two entries for this poster, hence I rejected the following
> one.
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
>
> You will get my comments on the following entry.
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63331
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
> On 2023-04-12 14:11, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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>> Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
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