STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Ziyang,

Sorry for the late reply. I don't have much to comment on your nice poster. Just some minor suggestions for your consideration: 

  - I. Introduction: [3, 4] --> move it before the period

                            Two plots cover the bottom frame a bit

                            Dimuon channel measurements --> Measurements from dimuon channel 

 - III:  first bullet: Figures 1 and 2 are the J/psi yield, so it is a bit strange saying "Dimuon measurement in Jpsi mass region", I would suggest to "J/psi invariant yields using mu+mu- channel" (or something like that)

 - IV: similar as the previous one: I would suggest to "mu+mu- invariant yields at low mass region"

 

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 2:17 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Helli Ziyang,

Thank you for implementing my comments and your reply.
I sign off.

Due to to time constraint, I am going to pass it to startalk.
Please consider Yi's comment in coming days.

Cheers
Nihar


On 2023-04-18 13:57, zli1 wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
>
> Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version (v2).
>
> For the bullets, you mentioned in Section.IV, the signification of the
> 2nd angular modulation is less than 3σ, so we didn't use 'indication'
> but used 'hint'.
>
> Best,
> Ziyang
>
> On 2023-04-18 14:48, Nihar Sahoo wrote:
>> Hello Ziyang,
>>
>> Thank you for your nice poster.
>> Please find my comments below.
>>
>>
>> Title: "\sqrt S_{\rm NN}" -> Mąkę small "s"
>>
>> Introduction:
>> "…Weizsacker-Williams equivalent photon approximation (EPA)" Please
>> provide a reference.
>>
>> This red colored texts may be not required in 3rd and 4th bullets.
>>
>> "at very low pT" -> it would be good if you can give threshold like
>> energy of quasi-real photon etc.
>> You did not introduce what is ultra-peripheral collisions? People may
>> not know UPC in heavy-ion collisions better to say a few words.
>>
>> 5th bullet is saying same as 4th bullet except the "STAR observation".
>> "Evidence of photon interactions in hadronic heavy ion collisions."
>> This can be sub-bullet of 4th with "Evidence of photon interactions in
>> hadronic heavy ion collisions seen at the STAR experiment.
>> And Remove 5th bullet.
>>
>>
>> Section.II
>> "Muon PID at STAR" -> "Muon indentification at STAR"
>>
>> "Measure energy loss, dE/dx cut." -> "Particle identification using
>> dE/dX"
>> "Trigger on and identify muons." -> "Identification and triggering on
>> muon"
>>
>> Section.IV
>>
>> "Excesses concentrate below pT" -> "Excess dimuon yield concentrates
>> at below pT.."
>>
>> "Indication of the 4th-order azimuthal angular modulation of μ+μ-
>> pairs." And
>> "The hint of 2nd-order azimuthal angular modulation."
>>
>> I think you want to say that the data indicate both the 2nd and 4th
>> order angular modulations.
>> Is it?
>>
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
>>
>> On 2023-04-13 21:25, zli1 via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>> Hi Barbara,
>>>
>>> Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> Ziyang
>>> On 2023-04-13 15:52, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
>>>> Hi Ziyang,
>>>>
>>>> very nice poster. Please see below my comments.
>>>>
>>>> - General: improve the quality of the plots. I would also suggest
>>>> increasing the font size.
>>>>
>>>> Introduction:
>>>> - "Evidence of photon interactions ... " - use the same font size as
>>>> for the rest of the text.
>>>> - Dimuon channel measurements provide additional statistics ->
>>>> Dimuon
>>>> channel measurements complement the previous results from dielectron
>>>> channel
>>>>
>>>> - Add reference to the plots. Move the text that is below to the
>>>> figures to the top.
>>>>
>>>> Muon PID at STAR:
>>>> - "Au+Au ..." text on the 1/beta figure is not well visible, either
>>>> move it or use a different color.
>>>>
>>>> J/psi measurements:
>>>> - "The invariant yield (left) ... " and "The p_T^2 distribution of
>>>> J/psi yield (left) ... " - you can move this text to the figures'
>>>> captions, in this way you will have more space to increase the font
>>>> size in other places.
>>>> - consistent with EPA calculation. [4] -> consistent with EPA
>>>> calculations [4].
>>>>
>>>> μ+μ- continuum measurements:
>>>>
>>>> - "The μ+μ- excess yields as a function of invariant mass (right)"
>>>> and "The p_T^2 distribution of excess yield (left) ... "- same as
>>>> before, you can move this text to the figures' captions, in this way
>>>> you will have more space to increase the font size in other places.
>>>> - as a function of invariant mass (right) ->  as a function of
>>>> invariant mass (left)
>>>> - in peripheral collisions. -> in peripheral collisions (right).
>>>> - delta phi distribution(right) -> delta phi distribution (right),
>>>> in
>>>> peripheral collisions
>>>> - It would be good to define delta phi
>>>>
>>>> Summary:
>>>> - The data are comparable with the EPA calculations indicating ->
>>>> The
>>>> EPA calculations can describe the data indicating
>>>> - Provide the experimental confirmation of the EPA predictions and
>>>> can
>>>> be used to map -> Can be used to map
>>>>
>>>> Cheers,
>>>> Barbara
>>>>
>>>> On Thu, Apr 13, 2023 at 3:03 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l
>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hello Nihar,
>>>>>
>>>>> Sorry for the mistake, and thank you for the help.
>>>>> But I haven't found your comments in this link, did I miss
>>>>> something?
>>>>>
>>>>> Best,
>>>>> Ziyang
>>>>>
>>>>> On 2023-04-12 18:21, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>> Hello Ziyang,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I can see two entries for this poster, hence I rejected the
>>>>> following
>>>>>> one.
>>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
>>>>>>
>>>>>> You will get my comments on the following entry.
>>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63331
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Cheers
>>>>>> Nihar
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 2023-04-12 14:11, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for
>>>>> a
>>>>>>> review,
>>>>>>> please have a look:
>>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Deadline: 2023-04-24
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