STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Ziyang,

Thanks a lot for the updated version.

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 8:39 PM zli1 <zli1 AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Yi,

Thanks for your nice suggestions, I upload a new version (v3).

For the first bullet in III and IV, I want to say the subsystems used in
mu+mu- measurements in the different mass region, since I introduce 3
subsystems in II but they are not all used in these two mass region.

Best,
Ziyang

On 2023-04-19 14:41, Yi Yang wrote:
> Hi Ziyang,
>
> Sorry for the late reply. I don't have much to comment on your nice
> poster. Just some minor suggestions for your consideration:
>   - I. Introduction: [3, 4] --> move it before the period
>                             Two plots cover the bottom frame a bit
>                             Dimuon channel measurements -->
> Measurements from dimuon channel
>  - III:  first bullet: Figures 1 and 2 are the J/psi yield, so it is a
> bit strange saying "Dimuon measurement in Jpsi mass region", I would
> suggest to "J/psi invariant yields using mu+mu- channel" (or something
> like that)
>  - IV: similar as the previous one: I would suggest to "mu+mu-
> invariant yields at low mass region"
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
> On Wed, Apr 19, 2023 at 2:17 PM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Helli Ziyang,
>>
>> Thank you for implementing my comments and your reply.
>> I sign off.
>>
>> Due to to time constraint, I am going to pass it to startalk.
>> Please consider Yi's comment in coming days.
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
>> On 2023-04-18 13:57, zli1 wrote:
>>> Hi Nihar,
>>>
>>> Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version (v2).
>>>
>>> For the bullets, you mentioned in Section.IV, the signification of
>> the
>>> 2nd angular modulation is less than 3σ, so we didn't use
>> 'indication'
>>> but used 'hint'.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> Ziyang
>>>
>>> On 2023-04-18 14:48, Nihar Sahoo wrote:
>>>> Hello Ziyang,
>>>>
>>>> Thank you for your nice poster.
>>>> Please find my comments below.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Title: "\sqrt S_{\rm NN}" -> Mąkę small "s"
>>>>
>>>> Introduction:
>>>> "…Weizsacker-Williams equivalent photon approximation (EPA)"
>> Please
>>>> provide a reference.
>>>>
>>>> This red colored texts may be not required in 3rd and 4th
>> bullets.
>>>>
>>>> "at very low pT" -> it would be good if you can give threshold
>> like
>>>> energy of quasi-real photon etc.
>>>> You did not introduce what is ultra-peripheral collisions? People
>> may
>>>> not know UPC in heavy-ion collisions better to say a few words.
>>>>
>>>> 5th bullet is saying same as 4th bullet except the "STAR
>> observation".
>>>> "Evidence of photon interactions in hadronic heavy ion
>> collisions."
>>>> This can be sub-bullet of 4th with "Evidence of photon
>> interactions in
>>>> hadronic heavy ion collisions seen at the STAR experiment.
>>>> And Remove 5th bullet.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Section.II
>>>> "Muon PID at STAR" -> "Muon indentification at STAR"
>>>>
>>>> "Measure energy loss, dE/dx cut." -> "Particle identification
>> using
>>>> dE/dX"
>>>> "Trigger on and identify muons." -> "Identification and
>> triggering on
>>>> muon"
>>>>
>>>> Section.IV
>>>>
>>>> "Excesses concentrate below pT" -> "Excess dimuon yield
>> concentrates
>>>> at below pT.."
>>>>
>>>> "Indication of the 4th-order azimuthal angular modulation of
>> μ+μ-
>>>> pairs." And
>>>> "The hint of 2nd-order azimuthal angular modulation."
>>>>
>>>> I think you want to say that the data indicate both the 2nd and
>> 4th
>>>> order angular modulations.
>>>> Is it?
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Cheers
>>>> Nihar
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 2023-04-13 21:25, zli1 via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>> Hi Barbara,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version.
>>>>>
>>>>> Best,
>>>>> Ziyang
>>>>> On 2023-04-13 15:52, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Ziyang,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> very nice poster. Please see below my comments.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> - General: improve the quality of the plots. I would also
>> suggest
>>>>>> increasing the font size.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Introduction:
>>>>>> - "Evidence of photon interactions ... " - use the same font
>> size as
>>>>>> for the rest of the text.
>>>>>> - Dimuon channel measurements provide additional statistics ->
>>>>>> Dimuon
>>>>>> channel measurements complement the previous results from
>> dielectron
>>>>>> channel
>>>>>>
>>>>>> - Add reference to the plots. Move the text that is below to
>> the
>>>>>> figures to the top.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Muon PID at STAR:
>>>>>> - "Au+Au ..." text on the 1/beta figure is not well visible,
>> either
>>>>>> move it or use a different color.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> J/psi measurements:
>>>>>> - "The invariant yield (left) ... " and "The p_T^2 distribution
>> of
>>>>>> J/psi yield (left) ... " - you can move this text to the
>> figures'
>>>>>> captions, in this way you will have more space to increase the
>> font
>>>>>> size in other places.
>>>>>> - consistent with EPA calculation. [4] -> consistent with EPA
>>>>>> calculations [4].
>>>>>>
>>>>>> μ+μ- continuum measurements:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> - "The μ+μ- excess yields as a function of invariant mass
>> (right)"
>>>>>> and "The p_T^2 distribution of excess yield (left) ... "- same
>> as
>>>>>> before, you can move this text to the figures' captions, in
>> this way
>>>>>> you will have more space to increase the font size in other
>> places.
>>>>>> - as a function of invariant mass (right) ->  as a function of
>>>>>> invariant mass (left)
>>>>>> - in peripheral collisions. -> in peripheral collisions
>> (right).
>>>>>> - delta phi distribution(right) -> delta phi distribution
>> (right),
>>>>>> in
>>>>>> peripheral collisions
>>>>>> - It would be good to define delta phi
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Summary:
>>>>>> - The data are comparable with the EPA calculations indicating
>> ->
>>>>>> The
>>>>>> EPA calculations can describe the data indicating
>>>>>> - Provide the experimental confirmation of the EPA predictions
>> and
>>>>>> can
>>>>>> be used to map -> Can be used to map
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>> Barbara
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On Thu, Apr 13, 2023 at 3:03 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l
>>>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Hello Nihar,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Sorry for the mistake, and thank you for the help.
>>>>>>> But I haven't found your comments in this link, did I miss
>>>>>>> something?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>>> Ziyang
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 2023-04-12 18:21, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hello Ziyang,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> I can see two entries for this poster, hence I rejected the
>>>>>>> following
>>>>>>>> one.
>>>>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> You will get my comments on the following entry.
>>>>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63331
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Cheers
>>>>>>>> Nihar
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On 2023-04-12 14:11, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a
>> material for
>>>>>>> a
>>>>>>>>> review,
>>>>>>>>> please have a look:
>>>>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63332
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Deadline: 2023-04-24
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