STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Andrew,

Please find my comments on your nice posters.

Motivation:

1_ I think those cartoons belong to Section EEC where you mention the 
expression.
Please move it. And you can make some adjustment in the wording of last 
sentence then.

2_ Please mention what are E_i,j and pT_jet

STAR experiment..

3_ "GEANT (detector level) and PYTHIA (particle level)" -> In plot, you 
used "measured" and "true".
     Please use consistent label then.

Results:

4_ "Behavior in non-perturbative region reflects behavior of particles 
uniformly distributed in phase-space determined via a toy model" -> Not 
clear, what you want to say here? Please rephrase it.

5_ "Consistent with measurements from ALICE and CMS" -> Give references

6_ "𝒑𝐓𝑱𝒆𝒕" -> correct it, make consistent through out the poster.

7_ Jet Radius -> Jet radius


Cheers
Nihar





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