STAR HardProbes PWG

[Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu>]

Hello Nihar,

Thank you for the nice comments, I have implemented them and uploaded a new version 

Best,

Andrew

On Sun, Aug 27, 2023 at 8:23 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Andrew,

Please find my comments on your nice posters.

Motivation:

1_ I think those cartoons belong to Section EEC where you mention the
_expression_.
Please move it. And you can make some adjustment in the wording of last
sentence then.

2_ Please mention what are E_i,j and pT_jet

STAR experiment..

3_ "GEANT (detector level) and PYTHIA (particle level)" -> In plot, you
used "measured" and "true".
      Please use consistent label then.

Results:

4_ "Behavior in non-perturbative region reflects behavior of particles
uniformly distributed in phase-space determined via a toy model" -> Not
clear, what you want to say here? Please rephrase it.

5_ "Consistent with measurements from ALICE and CMS" -> Give references

6_ "𝒑𝐓𝑱𝒆𝒕" -> correct it, make consistent through out the poster.

7_ Jet Radius -> Jet radius


Cheers
Nihar





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