STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for taking this comment. The poster looks great!

Cheers,

Yi

On Wed, Aug 30, 2023 at 4:49 PM Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu> wrote:

Hello Yi,

Yes good point, I agree that it may be hard to see, I have replaced the color change with an underline.

Best,

Andrew

On Wed, Aug 30, 2023 at 11:16 AM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I don't have any further comments on it, except I am worrying that some words in grey color probably will not be clear in the printout. 

Cheers,

Yi

On Tue, Aug 29, 2023 at 7:10 PM Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu> wrote:

Hello Isaac and Yi,

Thank you for the very helpful comments, I have uploaded a new version implementing them.  For Isaac's fourth comment I added "Angular scales between all particles separate out regimes" and will mention verbally that this allows us to view non-perturbative information excluded by methods such as SoftDrop.  Let me know if you think this is sufficient

Best,

Andrew

On Tue, Aug 29, 2023 at 6:36 AM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: The way of adding references is unusual, but it is okay to me. I would suggest making them in the same font size. 

 - Motivation: 

     - Try to use "-->" instead of "->" in Smaller angle -> later time. This will give you a prettier (to me) arrow. :-) 

     - GEANT 3 --> GEANT3

 - EEC:

     - Is it possible to move "Ei" up, so they can be in the same line? 

   

Cheers,

Yi

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