STAR HardProbes PWG

[Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu>]

Hi Nihar,

Apologies, I uploaded the changes on the first link of the chain, but it seems like that points to a slightly different link than the second, I have updated both

Best,

Andrew

On Mon, Aug 28, 2023 at 12:47 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Andrew,

I can't see any changes in the poster.
Have you applied in "Tamis_QM2023_Poster_Draft_v1.pdf "?

Best
Nihar

On 2023-08-28 14:13, Andrew Tamis wrote:
> Hello Nihar,
>
> Thank you for the nice comments, I have implemented them and uploaded
> a new version
>
> Best,
> Andrew
>
> On Sun, Aug 27, 2023 at 8:23 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hello Andrew,
>>
>> Please find my comments on your nice posters.
>>
>> Motivation:
>>
>> 1_ I think those cartoons belong to Section EEC where you mention
>> the
>> _expression_.
>> Please move it. And you can make some adjustment in the wording of
>> last
>> sentence then.
>>
>> 2_ Please mention what are E_i,j and pT_jet
>>
>> STAR experiment..
>>
>> 3_ "GEANT (detector level) and PYTHIA (particle level)" -> In plot,
>> you
>> used "measured" and "true".
>> Please use consistent label then.
>>
>> Results:
>>
>> 4_ "Behavior in non-perturbative region reflects behavior of
>> particles
>> uniformly distributed in phase-space determined via a toy model" ->
>> Not
>> clear, what you want to say here? Please rephrase it.
>>
>> 5_ "Consistent with measurements from ALICE and CMS" -> Give
>> references
>>
>> 6_ "𝒑𝐓𝑱𝒆𝒕" -> correct it, make consistent through out
>> the poster.
>>
>> 7_ Jet Radius -> Jet radius
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
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